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baby messerDanny and Lindsay



Danny & Lindsay decided to go on a 2 week vacation. Lindsay's parents were eager to see baby Lucy.
So the favor was done....& now they were on a 3 hour plane ride to Montana.
Finally reaching the airport...Lucy started feeling a little sick.

"Omg danny, lucy looks like shes going to throw up...help me take her to the closest bathroom."- says lindsay.
Danny disgusted by the word "throw up" ...says " Sure, but you hold her while i open the bathroom door."
"Alright..but we should be hurrying up...i dont think lucy can hold it in any longer"-lindsay
"Okay okay...lets go than."-danny

When danny & lindsay finally get out of their seats a flight attendent rushes to tell them to stop and to wait until the plane lands.

"exsue me, but the plane is going to land soon.."-flight attendent
danny intrupts and says "sorry but our daughter isnt feeling well, we were just taking her to the bathroom."
"well sir...we have bags for that matter..just sit down & i'll go get one!" Flight attendent
lindsay & lucy than turn to danny.
"oh how silly of us not to know..." says lindsay stressed & a little bit annoyed.
danny responds to the flight attendent.
"ah okay but i think its more convient if we had one by our seats like most air planes do, uh?"

The flight attendent frowns & responds.
"well, sir we are not like most airplanes..now take ur seats & i'll get you a bag."

"Fine fine..now hurry up..our daugther is gonna hurl any second now!'-danny

The flight attendent rushes to get the vomit bag for lucy.
One of many disadvantages of having a baby...they get sick easily.



A few hours later- Lindsays home in Montana.

After leaving the airport...in a yellow taxi cab the messers reach mr. & mrs. monroes home.

Danny takes a quick glance at the house & says to lindsay.
"Well, montana this house doesnt look like anything that you been telling me about..this isnt a farm.."
Lindsay smiles while getting lucy out of the taxi cab.
"well, danny this is the front of the house...you can't put animals or crops here..thats why my parents have
a backyard.. main area for the animals & crops. you've been spending all your life in the city, huh?"

Danny laughs & responds
"yeah yeah ...anyways wheres your folks?"

lindsay responds jokingly "Idk danny maybe we should ring the door bell...you havent seen one of those either?"

"Very funny montana..now let me be the gentlemen & ring the door bell.."-danny


After danny rings the door bell...no one answers.
Lindsay seems undisturbed & says " danny i think they might be in the backyard lets go through the gate by the bushes."
danny shrugs & says "ah okay..but let me hold lucy now..btw where we leave our luggage?"

lindsay hands over lucy to danny & says "well we can leave our belongings here for now...lets go find my parents & than we can put our things inside"


danny smiles when lucy looks at him.

afterwords the messers go to lindsays parents backyard.
Mr. & Mrs. Monroe sat distant from the house, figures why they didnt hear the doorbell.

Lindsay runs to their parents & mrs. monroe gets up and goes to hug her daughter.

"Omg lindsay!...i miss you so much sweetie...charlie & cookie miss you too..& of course daddy does too"-Mrs. monroe

Lindsay laughs & smiles
"well mom its been a while...but i do miss being here."

Lindsays dad stands up & give lindsay a big hug.
& danny just stands there with lucy just staring at the ground.

Lindsay tells her parents " well this is my husband danny messer..& my daughter lucy."
gesturing to danny & lucy who just stood clueless now staring at them & their farm.

danny smiles to his parents in law ....& says "nice to meet you...um so you guys have a big farm here.."

lindsay laughs.
mr. monroe than responds " well its nice to meet our son in law for the first time...even though nobody invited us to the wedding.'
lindsay -" oh daddd.."

mrs. monroe laughs & responds " yes its very nice to meet you too danny...& dont listen to my husband..we're glad to have you here & little lucy too. may i hold her?"

danny hands lucy over to mrs.monroe.
later on mr. & mrs. monroe play with lucy.

danny and lindsay take a walk around the farm.

(btw charlie is a orange cat & cookie is lindsays horse.)

-2 hours later ( dinner with the monroes)

Everyone sat in a nice..comfy but big dinning room table with maroon colored wallpaper & candle scented air fresheners.

danny stared intently at the oak wood table , it had a glossy look & feel. he was amazed that lindsay didnt live so rural as imagined.
Little lucy sat in her baby chair..while lindsay fed her peas & apple sauce( btw not at the same time ).
Mr. & Mrs. Monroe just glared at how the messers looked so caught up with everything..than decided to start a conversation.

"So does everyone like the mash potatoes & homemade steak?"-mrs. monroe said. ( homemade meaning mr. monroe had the time & affection to kill one of their farm animals
hinting to bitsy a young adult cow which lindsay hasnt heard or seen before..well now she actually has seen & ate it for the first & last time.)

"um its delicious...thanks..but where are me & my girls are gonna stay?"-danny

(its funny how danny refers to lindsay & lucy as his girls)

lindsay gestures at her parents with her eyes.

mrs. monroe responds "um well we a guest room upstairs...& also lindsays old room which lucy can stay..and."

lindsay cuts her off "well dont we have a little apartment out back where me, danny & lucy can stay..remember our deal?"
mr. monroe responds "Oh yes..i remember ..."

danny randomly says "wait..i'm lost..what deal?"

mrs. monroe replies" once lindsay got married..we decided since she proably would visit us..to build a little apartment out back
by the farm where she can have her privacy."

danny-"ahh i see..."

lindsay-" yes exsactly...um so its getting a little late ...i'm going to take little lucy to the apartment. danny & dad take our stuff there as well.please"
mrs. monroe says "yes gentlemen...do as she says."
danny & her father shrug & say at the same time.. "fine"

thats one thing danny & his father in-law have in common..being lazy.

a half hour later-

lucy was tucked in her little crib by danny. ( which belonged to lindsay when she was an infant herself.)

lindsay stood watching.

she than played a song for lucy..in a cd player a few inches away from the crib.
(it was put very low of course)

danny & lindsay kisses little lucy on the forehead just before they left the room.

while putting their belongings away in the little apartment.

danny went around snooping & found the place to be very well built.
Cream colored wallpaper in the living room.
-sea green colored kitchen.
-rose colored wallpaper for lucys room
-light cloudless blue wallpaper for the bathroom
-finally. cherry colored wallpaper for mr. & mrs.messers room.
the furniture was very comfy but expensive.
the floors contained only of the finest wood & carpet.

danny thought he had walked into a fantasy..everything seemed so organized..so perfect.

than
lindsay went looking for danny.
she finally caught him observing a little waterfall sculpture by the bathroom.

"ah danny?"-lindsay

"um..yesss...oh sorry..i got a little carried away."-danny

"i can see that.."-lindsay

"um i never thought montana..you would be living in this kind of envorinment."-danny

"big surprise huh?..besides i think i shouldnt brag about living a little more fancy than most people in my neighbor hood.
i wouldnt wanna be shallow."-lindsay

"uhh i see...well i think we should go to bed. we should take little lucy somewhere tomorrow."-danny

"good idea..but i think you shouldnt stare at the waterfall too much.."-lindsay

"why is that"-danny

"you might make your eyes water."-lindsay (point of joke - since danny thought it was so beautiful ...he might end up tearing up .)
"haha.. you think your so funny..anyways lets go to bed."-danny

when the messers were sound asleep...

a crime was commited a few miles away from the monroes home/farm.

local night club in wyoming, montana.
song playing-


teens in the club..were drinking...dancing their hearts out while a couple steps outside for a couple of air.
"josh..my feet hurt."-mary

"what am i gonna do about it!"-josh

"a massage would help!"-mary

"in the middle of the side walk by the club ..your crazy"-josh

"uhhh whatever..but do you hear that?"-mary

"hear what?"-josh

"ticking!..."-mary

"no...but how many drinks you had?"-josh

"one!..& i'm not drunk..i swear i hear something!"-mary

after a few moments of silence...the ticking grew louder and louder.

suddenly a huge explosion filled the bar.

mary & josh ran for it.

half of the club was gone but the other half just stood there.

about 25 teenages were hurt. 50 more dead.


at about 8am...danny & lindsay wake up.

sirens go crazy.

baby lucy starts crying a storm

lindsay runs to go check on her.

danny looks out the window.

"looks like theres trouble."-danny

"i can imagine..everywhere we go theres always something wrong bound to happen."-says lindsay holding little lucy

"you wanna take a look?"-danny

"sure..i actually know most of the csi's here. but first lets leave my mother in charge of lucy for a bit."-lindsay

"okay...& lets do that second..we gotta change our clothes or you prefer to wear pj's."-danny

"right...i'm going to change lucy's diaper...& of course change out of my pj's while you just make breakfast & change as well."-lindsay

"montana...you gotta make everything difficult dont you?"-danny

"its a wifes job ,danny."-lindsay

"oh okay."-danny

after about an hour, lindsay & danny head down to the crime scene
while little lucy stays with mr. & mrs. monroe.

lindsay than approaches the csi's ...

danny just stands behind the crime scene tape & watches.

"hey linds..i havent seen you since you left the team a few years ago."-det. trent carter
lindsay than hugs trent...& replies."yeah its been a while..but i see you guys have a crime on your hands."

"yep..50 murdered...25 wounded....i havent seen such fatality since 1987."-det. trent carter

"do you know what cased the club to end up like this?"lindsay

"looks like an explosion..but strange.. half of the buliding is still standing."-det.trent carter

"do you guys need extra help?"-lindsay

"well it would be great..do you have anyone else with you?"-det.trent carter

"in matter of fact i do..my husband danny ...hes also a csi."-lindsay

lindsay gestures at danny to come over.

trent stares at danny for a moment surprised that lindsay was married && totally jealious.

danny shakes his hand.

"hello my name is det.carter."-det. trent carter

"det.messer."-danny

"so how long you guys been married ?"-det.carter

" about a few months, we recently had our daughter lucy"-lindsay


"umm sounds exciting...well anyways can you guys help process some evidence?
most of my crew are busy on another crime scene involving a neighborhood fire."-det.carter

"okay, lets go danny."-lindsay

danny & lindsay than get equipment needed to process the scene.

two other montana csi's helped out.

det.daisy hartley & det.sarah goodman

(i'll make this story a lil more interesting..i want the readers to guess who might of set the bomb & killed all those people)
in remaining half of the club.
danny & lindsay than collect several blood samples & some identified items.

on the other side where there was a very good view of the morning sky..det. daisy & sarah take samples of bomb residue.

evidence found so far-( lab results & theory.)

-gun powder left from the homemade bomb.

- blood from several teenagers. (weridly enough the bartender had not one scratch on him.)

-mens bathroom. area of the bombs release.
-25 victims said that they didnt hear any bomb until the explosion.
-about 6 dead victims near the bathroom went into autospy.
-identified ipod found playing classical music.(belonging to josh)
-used condom( dna identifing belonging to one of the injured-name matthew lanes)

-half of the boys bathroom was gone but the remaining is where the condom & ipod where found.

- fingerprints found near the door of the bathroom where the bomb was set.

who do you think they belong to?

-matthew lanes
-josh
-bartender

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after processing the crime scene lindsay & danny went home to see lucy.

its been about 6 hours.

lucy was taking a nap & the monroes were watching afternoon movies.

lindsay & danny decided to go for dinner at "big rileys diner "

-big rileys

"i'll have a steak with fries & veggie rice"-lindsay

"okay & what will you have sir?"-waiter

"um..whatever shes having."-danny

"alright..wat do you guys want to drink?"-waiter

lindsay gestures at danny. danny makes a you chose face....

"um two beers."-lindsay

"got it..now you will have to wait at least half an hour..do you guys want the beer now?"-waiter

"when the food comes please"-lindsay

the waiter responds."alrighttt."

danny makes a funny face at the waiter.
the waiter doesnt notice but walks away to give the order to the chef.

Meanwhile at csi montana crime lab.

det.carter & his team of csi s & forensic scientists look over evidence found at the crime scene.

the prints pulled from inside the bathroom door come from a unknown donor.

-but the bartenters hand print was found outside the door.

det.goodman spoke to the suspect.

heres how it went.

"mr. tarantino, some of my team of csi's found your hand print at the primary crime scene...care to explain or would you like for me to tell the story."-det.goodman

"call me matt, & in matter of fact...i was at the bathroom but not placing a bomb there or anything harmful."-bartenter

"funny, i didnt ask you if you put the bomb or not...i just wondered why you where in the bathroom at that stall but thanks for cooperation."-det.goodman

"your welcome..i just said that cas i knew you where going to ask me that later on..so i made this conversation shorter & i'll be on my way out now right?"-bartenter


"Not quite."-det.goodman

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guess what happens next?

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Back at Big rileys.

"That was the most delicious steak i've ever eaten montana...i might end up living here."-danny

"haha, see its not so bad where i live right?"-lindsay

"not exsactly..you wanna leave soon..go for a walk?"-danny

"sure sounds fun..lets pay the check first."-lindsay

"okay, i'll pay.."-danny

he than grabs the check ...stares at it closely for a bit and than takes out his wallet
& puts down 60.00 bucks. (the total was 58.95.)

Afterwords lindsay gets up , puts on her coat & danny puts down the money with the check..and walks with her
out the diner.

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crime lab

-mr.tarantino was part of the crime, but he didnt put the bomb or set it.
he just offered space & had motive to kill certain people & destory the club

but his partner ran away somewhere to take care of some business.

-you really dont wanna know what happens next.

-get ready for some tears...triumph & tragic enddings.


mr.tarantinos partner is alcott emmings.

finally confessing to the crime...

he told montana csi's that mr.emmings was planning to kidnap
a child and ransom the parents for a billion dollars.

hinting:...two csi's from ny...

stay tunedd.



































































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