The Wedding
PS: This story is set in the future.
I can't believe its finally going to happen, my daughter is getting married said an emotional Lindsay. Mom, please don't cry I already had to deal with dad crying. Hey! I didn't cry! My eyes started watering, allergies you know. Uh huh, sure dad whatever you say said smiling Lucy. A few minutes later there was a knock at the door, at the door was Lucy's fiancee Jonathan and his parents. Lucy guestered for them to come in. Mom, Dad this is Jonathan's parents Eric and Calleigh Delko. Danny then realized that he knew the couple. He had worked with them years ago on a case. Yea, It's good to see you again. You to, they both said in unison. Wait dad how do you know them? I actually worked on a case with them a long time ago.
Later that day
Lucy went to work at the crime lab, she is a Detective like her parents. She and Stella were working on a case where a young girl, not much younger than Lucy, was killed. A shipment of guns that the ATF were looking for was found in the house, along with a considerable amount of drugs. They think they belong to the known gang the La Cahros. They're very dangerous, and they've never been caught. The girl is thought to have been a girlfriend of the leader of the La Cahros, Ramando Valquez. Lucy met with Jonathan and both of their mothers to finish up on the details of the wedding on her lunch break. While at lunch Lucy gets a call from Stella saying that they have a lead on who killed the girl, who was finally identified as Alyse Martinez. She met up with Stella at an abandoned warehouse is Queens. A couple of the gang members were suppose to be inside. The SWAT team motioned for everyone to move, when they entered they found one of the members dead. It was Pedro Valquez, Ramando Valquez's brother. They discovered that Pedro was killed by another member of the gang who wanted to leave their " family ".
2 days later ** The day before the wedding **
Lucy was freaking out, nothing was happening the way it was suppose to. One of her bridesmaids was MIA. Apparently she went out with someone the night before. When she finally took a break, her phone rang. It was Stella saying that they had another clue to where the La Cahros were, and they needed to move now. She met up with Stella and the SWAT team. They told Stella and Lucy to stay back. When they went inside, they saw some of the members. They automatically drew their weapons, the SWAT leader was yelling " PUT THE GUNS DOWN, NOW!! ". They began to shoot, and it was an all out war. While the fight was going on members from behind grabbed Stella and Lucy.
To Be Continued!
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Jul 12 2010, 8:06 PM EDT by
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This a new series i am writing, hope you like it!! : D
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Not bad, but could use beta'ing. If you want, I can be your beta.
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